Disclaimer: I’ve only recently finished an “expert” song, so take take this with a heaping pile of salt.
You seem to be switching between the vocals and instrumental notes. I would pick a lane and stick with it. Personally, I enjoy songs that follow the beat rather than the vocals if that makes sense.
That being said, I hope my first venture into song creation is as good as yours.
Disclaimer: I’ve only recently finished an “expert” song, so take take this with a heaping pile of salt.
You seem to be switching between the vocals and instrumental notes. I would pick a lane and stick with it. Personally, I enjoy songs that follow the beat rather than the vocals if that makes sense.
That being said, I hope my first venture into song creation is as good as yours.